Deep down in the dark blue sea Marlin was sitting on a rock along came Dory. “Hey Grumpy Gills” Dory yelled. “When life gets you down, you know what you gotta do” Dory ask?
“I don’t want to know what , you gotta do” Marlin whispered sadly
“Just keep swimming, just keep swimming, just keep swimming, swimming, swimming” Dory sang it in a loud voice . “What we do , we” swim swim swim” Dory singing even louder .” As she was singing she was holding Marlin’s arm going down and down and deeper to the dark. ,
“Dory, no singing” Marlin shouted.
“I love to swim when you want to swim” Dory yelled happily .
“SEE I’M GONNA GET STUCK NOW WITH THAT SONG NOW ITS IN MY HEAD” Marlin shouted with anger.
“Sorry” Dory whispered.
Hi Ana,
ReplyDeleteLoved your story, I like how you added detail.
Keep It Up !
Hey Ana,
ReplyDeleteAwesome story and I my favourite part of this post was "Marlin shouted with anger." I love it how you did one of your sentence all in capitals. Its good how you drawled it dark just like a dark hole. Keep It Up Bestie!
Quziyah(: