“Yeah”, I shouted. “It’s the holidays”. On the first day of the holidays I cleaned the house. Then on the second day of the holidays I went to the movies which was so much fun. My dad asked me what movie should we watch and I picked battleship because it looked cool. When I entered the cinema I already knew that battleship was going to be awesome.
“Haha”, I said laughing out loud. “That was a really funny movie”. The movie was so much fun because there were robots and armies. My favourite part was when the robots and the armies were fighting, and the best of all was that Rihanna was in the Movie. It was just so amazing.
After the movie I was exhausted. So I slept in the car. My holiday was the best. I hope I get another holiday like this.
“Haha”, I said laughing out loud. “That was a really funny movie”. The movie was so much fun because there were robots and armies. My favourite part was when the robots and the armies were fighting, and the best of all was that Rihanna was in the Movie. It was just so amazing.
After the movie I was exhausted. So I slept in the car. My holiday was the best. I hope I get another holiday like this.
Great start to the term Ana.
ReplyDeleteI really like that you have included a variety of sentence types with speech and statements. Well done.
Just remember that paragraphs should only have 3-4 sentences in them.
ok I will remember Mr Marks
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