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Thursday, February 16, 2012

kiwifruit





As I stared at my Kiwifruit it reminded me of a Potato. When I looked inside there were black spots like little ants. I saw green drops of juice on my fingers.

I squashed my Kiwifruit into the palm of my hands, it felt really soft. But the outside of my Kiwifruit was hairy and spiky. I liked the inside of my Kiwifruit because it felt so so soft.

When I chewed my yummy Kiwifruit it was juicy and delicious. The juice from my Kiwifruit tasted nice I just wanted to get another one.

Wednesday, June 1, 2011

Adding Detail of Sentences


We had to learn to add detail to our sentences and we did some writing. Writing a story about a spaceship is very hard.


Here are the sentences that we wrote.

A girl called Chris invented the spaceship, she was Brave. A Elephant invented the spaceship on his Birthday. A Man invented the spaceship and he became famous.

Wednesday, May 18, 2011

What an Ambush


Today room 13 were learning about beginning
sentence we were look at Toreka blogger we were look at her beginning of her sentence have a variety of beginning we read toreka story called what an ambush and we had to all do the beginning of her sentence we had to put those beginning into wordle
.net
have a look.