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Monday, March 4, 2013

The Magical Tunnel

At  school there is  this boy called Sam. Their class was doing SSR and Sam got this book called the Big Tunnel.
He put his hand on it to have a touch and his hand went right through. It was magical!  He was shaking. Inside it felt wet and watery, but when he pulled his hand out it was dry! Sam was thinking “What  kind of tunnel is that?”

He really wanted to know what is in there. So he stuck his head inside and he could feel the wind blowing on him. He could see a cave filled with treasure he saw gold, money, necklaces, jewels,wand and a crown. It was just so cool.

So then he got in he was walking to the treasure. All of a sudden the book flew down and Sam was stuck. He couldn't find a way out so he cried for help. Then he was thinking about it, he went back to the treasure. He got the wand and was saying all of these magic words. Finally it worked and Sam got out, he was so happy.

When he got out he had some treasure with him gold and everything. When he got home he put his magical book away somewhere safe so when he need it he will get it.

SSR was finished said Sam’s teacher. Then they had lunch yum yum he wanted to tell his teacher but he wanted to tell his mum and dad first.

“Home time” his teacher said. Sam’s mum was waiting for him at the car park she saw him “Come on son we have  to go home or dad will be late for work.” “OK Mum” replied Sam as he got in the car. “Mum I have got this big long story to tell you.” “OK son tell me when we get home.” Said his mum.  


      

1 comment:

  1. Hi Ana,

    I loved your story so much you are the amazing person
    i ever met. KEEP IT UP.YOU ROCK MY HEART

    ReplyDelete

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