As I stared at my Kiwifruit it reminded me of a Potato. When I looked inside there were black spots like little ants. I saw green drops of juice on my fingers.
I squashed my Kiwifruit into the palm of my hands, it felt really soft. But the outside of my Kiwifruit was hairy and spiky. I liked the inside of my Kiwifruit because it felt so so soft.
When I chewed my yummy Kiwifruit it was juicy and delicious. The juice from my Kiwifruit tasted nice I just wanted to get another one.
Hi Ana I really enjoyed reading your writing.
ReplyDeleteI like the part when you said the out side of the kiwifruit was hairy and had spikes.
I think you improved heaps.
Keep up the aswome work!!!
Hi Ana,
ReplyDeleteYour picture of the kiwifruit was really cool and detailed. I like the way you described the kiwifruit in your story. Your writing was very interesting and I didn't get bored, not once!
Keep up the awesome writing!!!
From Thea
Wow Ana
ReplyDeletewhat a pretty cool blog post you have putted on your blog
Keep it up. I can't wait till your next blog post. I hope your next blog post is better then this.
Hi Ana Wow I like your writing you keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteHi Ana i like your work about the kiwifruit and i really like your picture that you drew the most thing that like about it was when you said that you wanted some more of it and keep up the great work
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