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Wednesday, March 7, 2012

obstacle Course


While Room 15 were walking to the hall I felt so happy. We sat down and listened. We were starting to play a game and we got blindfolded. It was so scary but my friend Aldora was with me.

I was so sacred when I got on the obstacle course. I felt like I was sleep walking through the course. Down I came. It was like falling down. It was easy but also scary.

On my feet my friend was holding my hand as we walked. We went over the beanbag there was two. It was fun.

2 comments:

  1. Amazing Story!,

    What a truly amazing story you have worked on really hard!

    Did you want to do it again and again!
    I am so proud of you that you worked hard!

    Josephine has hopedto see more!!

    Be sure to write some more posts!! <3

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  2. Hi Ana,

    I like your story. My favourite paragraph was paragraph 2 because you used a lot of cool words. Maybe next time you could use more detail. Keep up the great work,

    From Thea

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