Dad said “don’t go too far I am going to get something in the car”. “Ok, Yes dad” said Joshua dad went to get something in his car and then came back to go in the Water and he saw that Joshua was drowning.
dad started running as fast as he could help help said Joshua. Dad got In the water and Joshua was dieing dad swim to him and pick him up walk to the sand. Put him down and called the ambulance.
The ambulance came and took Joshua and dad went home to tell. Joshua mum then they went to see him “are you feeling good said mum.” Yes” then Joshua got to go home happy and safe with his mum and dad.
Amazing!
ReplyDeleteWho could have thought that you were great at writing stories? You have great skills in narrative.
Well done!
Hello Ana,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Samantha and I am from the United States. I just read your post about entitled Sunny Day, and I must say, you did a great job! I was very impressed with your use of quotation marks for the dialogue. I also loved your picture that was included at the top. Did you draw that yourself? Keep up the good work, Ana!
OMG HI I AM FROM NZ. YOU ARE SO PRETTY I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU ARE FROM UNITED STATES I AM WANTING TO COME THERE BUT IN NZ IT IS EXPERIENCES AND I AM JUST 10 MY MUM WILL SAY NO IF I ASK HER. A BIG NO HAHAH THANKS FOR READING MY WRITING BUY SAMANTHA.
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