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Friday, May 11, 2012


Room 15  had their  swimming Lessons today. I couldn't  wait  to  be  at the pools. I was so happy to get in the warm pool.Before we were allowed we had to go  rinse  off.  When we got into the pool  they put us into three groups.

I  was in group two   was so fun. The teacher  said  our  first  activity  was fast kicking.  It was my turn I was so  nervous.


Ready set go!  I was  shocked  it was like I was going to faint  but I  still  did it. Under the water I “said” to “myself” while I was sluggish kicking. I can’t be believed I did this. I  was swimming like I  hadn't swum before and everyone was laughing  at me. Finally I was done and I took a big breath.

We were finally done and we all went for a rinse and then we put on our uniform. Then we walked to school. I had so much fun I wish we had stayed there for long. My goal is to learn how to swim faster and catch up with the other kids.  
      

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  1. Mr Chris MarksMay 14, 2012 at 3:59 PM

    Well done recounting your experience Ana. I am glad to see you using topic words and explaining clearly what you did. You also had a good variety of sentence beginnings.

    Just be careful when using speech marks. You only use these around the words you have said. I would also like to see more of the juicy writing in your writing to make it more interesting. Like when you said you were sluggishly kicking.

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  2. KeisMay 18, 2012 at 12:48 PM

    Hi Ana

    I writing about swimming I was imprest keep it up

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