I went to the kitchen with my book, reading and walking at the same time “ouch” I said, I hit my head on the door. My mum called “what’s that” “nothing” I shouted. “who’s that” Mum said. "Just me Ana". “I thought you are reading your book” she said. “yeah I am but I’m just hungry” .
I got a piece of bread then I went back to my room. I am nearly finished reading my book. Then dinner was ready. Mum wanted everyone to come and sit at the table but I ignored her and finished my book.
“Yay i finished, oh ho oh ho” I shouted with excitement. I can’t believe I finished a big book in one day. I went to the kitchen and told mum and dad I had finished my book. “Good girl my mum and dad said. “What’s it about?”. “It’s a long story” I said. “Ok’ said my mum.
Great work Ana. I am very impressed that with your writing this week. I love that you chose to write about reading instead of sport. I also think it's great that you have used speech. Just be careful that you don't use to much speech as it becomes hard to read.
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ReplyDeleteI love how you finished your book instead of watching television:) This Shows Me you can be a true reader someday:)
I love how you always take care when your reading! and yes you do need to feed your brain to work harder! I am very proud!