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Monday, February 11, 2013

Going To The Beach

On saturday me and my family went to the beach because it was so hot, when we got out of the car. “Mum said when you get in the water don’t go to far do you all hear me” “ yes mum we all said”. My little sister and  had to wait unit  me dad come in.


When I got in the water it was so cold  yes it not so hot now I saw my big brother he was jumping of the wharf. He called me to come and jump of the wharf with him but I was so scared I didn’t want to. My dad came in with little sister my little sister was so happy to in the water.


My mum called us to come out now so we can it  I was the first  to come out and my little sister didn’t want to come out. When I came out I was cold I ran to my mum and my mum give me a  bar and chip. She told me to go and sit in the sun and  when you are finished you can go back and swim.  

1 comment:

  1. Hey Ana it must be so fun to go to the beach on a hot day. I spotted a mistake in your first paragraph. But otherwise everything was good, I hope you keep editing it. Was it cool when your brother jump off the wharf?

    KEEP UP THE COOL WORK!

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