With butterflies in my tummy, I look around at all the crowded people sitting down on the hot concrete, peering at me, I was racing all the year seven’s it was a challenge omg I might come last I was so scared I didn't
even want to run. But I had to and if I didn't come miss king would make me run on Monday at lunch time. Standing at the starting line I felt like crying.
“Mr Burt said are you ready , get your mark , ready set GO”. I ran as fast as I could running past all these people my brother said “Run faster.” I gave him my eye’s “Eww!” I said in my mind. I got up to the reserve and I was so tired I wanted to stop, but I still ran. We had to run two laps Which I really didn't like.
Then I was on my 2nd lap trying to finish quick so I can have a long break. As I started running again I saw the year eight girls. Then I saw a boy pass me. I wanted to run faster, but I couldn't because I was out of breath. I was pasting myself slowly so I won’t have to stop all the time. I could hear my friend’s saying run Ana run faster.
near to the finish line, I past some people and this lady looking familiar was like “run girl, run girlfriend to the end you can do it”. “Yaay the finish line is right in front of my brown eyes. I went past the finish line and came 9th. I was really proud of myself.
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ReplyDeleteHi Ana,
ReplyDeleteSeems like you made a HUGE effort into your run. I loved how you described your emotions.Your story seems very fun to read. I loved how you said you gave your brother the " eeww" look. What was your experience of Cross Country overall?
Hi ana
ReplyDeleteI just wanna say what a great story you wrote about cross country I liked how you described what you feeling at the start line till finish line.
keep up the great work.